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Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Choose It Narrative

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.


When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.



Image Attributions:
  1. Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons
  2. Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
  3. Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.


Begin Writing Here:

I'm riding a belt the balloon and Phoenix a bird and aeroplane and a water jet so they all come together and they all crash and the Phoenix come going through keeps doing and makes a tornado and a plane it's going through the tornadoes and it keeps going in and I heart balloon goes down all the was going up until I can reach Mars and the water jet stays in the water In the water there was a tornado and a volcano under the world's biggest volcano in the world




Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:
I have:
1
Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
2
I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.
3
I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.
4
I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.

Once you are finished…
  1. Make sure your blog post includes:
    1. JPEG of your planning
    2. A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing.
    3. Your story from above
  2. Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?
        2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3
  1. Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.

Monday, 21 May 2018

Jerry balls Experiment

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PT England school reading support

Thursday, 17 May 2018

codeing


this is me go to the end of code thank you the hour of code

Wednesday, 16 May 2018

Tuesday, 27 March 2018

New Zealand Birds

                   New Zealand Birds

Read your text again and fill in the table with the correct information.


What do these words mean?  Finish each sentence.

  1. Endemic means…
  2. Prey is something that…
  3. If an animal is nocturnal it means that…
  4. Sadly, many animals are endangered which means…

BLOG IT:

Take a screenshot of your table above and post it to your blog with three sentences about what we have learnt.