Jerry Show Not Tell Task

Show Not Tell

Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy 

Show sentence: It a cold day and run cold water Raindrops Down from The sky Hard To see The front Hard to see when I'm Driving down the street to the Road and The Brydge you coming down onto my covering turned down from the windows brewery to see the roads are covering weather

Tell sentence: I went to the beach.

Show sentence: it a sunny day to go to the beach and a hot day and from my Neck a Sweat of drops down on my leg and from The back of my Back And a look out of nowhere a see a bot Passing by go Toward the Pacific Ocean of leaving the land I see the bot in front of me seeing dolphins and look out in the sea I see sharks and other things Blue Sea Clearwater and i see a Coconut tree and that it…...

Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.

Show sentence: These shoes look like Old British newspapers and white stuff back and on leases All white things on it look like it came from The sewers look Out of the creek police came from the source found in the house in the Ground