Movie Narrative

Movie Narrative

WALT write our ideas in an order which makes sense.

WALT turn a narrative text into a movie storyboard.

Planning Slides

Start writing here: One morning there was a boy named Stevenson, he was cool and he was handsome and he was so in love with animals. One day Stevenson  went outside for adventurous walk with his dog Jaffa. While he was on his adventurous walk, he saw something very cool that was so beautiful he decided to walk over to the other side of the road and take a look at it. Guess what it was, it was a pet store. Stevenson was so happy that he took a look inside the shop.

When Stevenson entered, he saw a lot of cool things like goldfish,birds, cat and many more cool animals.

Stevenson was so happy that he. Could buy any animal in the shop, when he was looking around the shop, he saw a super cute cat and he fell in love with it so he bought it.

When he bought it he took it home with him that he made him a special bed and it was so warm.

Stevensons dog Jaffa was jealous because Stevenson was’t interested in the cat.

One night Jaffa was so angry Stevenson went to work one night and when the cat fell asleep, Jaffa went to go and gobble the cat up into his tummy.

YUM YUM said jaffa.

When stevenson came back from his job, he found out that he couldn’t find the cat, he looked and looked but couldn't find him.

Jaffa was sad that he did something wrong so he spewed the cat out of his tummy and jaffa got into deep trouble and jaffa got put down and Stevenson beautiful and  Enormous and the cat was so so Jealous and the cat How to get rid of the enormous big dog.................              

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Skydiving

 

Source

~ Skydiving ~

Imaginative Recount Writing

Walt: write an effective and engaging recount.

Walt: include a variety of sentence types in our writing.

Walt: elaborate on our ideas using interesting and relevant details.

Step 1: Watch the video of a skydive. Step 2:

Talk to your neighbour about what it would be like to go skydiving. Add your ideas to the padlet.
Step 3: Plan for your writing

Title
Imaginative Recount Writing
Introduction WWWWWH
Me and tipi.    I when it a plane i was Terrified. In a Alaska. Of the plane
3-4 Experiences
Experience: 1. 2. 3. 4.	Descriptive language/ elaborate: → → → →
Conclusion: How are you going to finish your recount?

Step 4: Start writing.

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Once upon a time I was terrified I was jumping off the flight I didn't know what I was doing then that's when I went jump off the plane I felt like ice cream stepping on my face then there was a felt like I was having a cold cold cold shower and school then there when I was terrified didn't know what to do then I'll put my parachutes then I felt like something was forcing me back I would like a dog pulling me and it was cool so as Icy cold shower

Checklist: I have watched the video of the sky dive. I have planned my writing. I have used punctuation (full stops, capital letters, etc.). I have added detail to my writing by adding descriptive vocab (adjectives, adverbs). I have used at least 3 of my senses in my writing (hear, see, taste, smell, touch). I have included my own emotions.

WRITE

Write out your voice over using paragraphs, ready to post on your blog. Begin by Copying and Pasting from the boxes above. Then read through it and fix it up (edit) to make sure it makes sense.
When my plane Takes off it has Force of Fly and And it goes around the world and needs to stop in different planes because of it's too. heavy it will not my problem it will go in the water when they they never stop when you're going to Australia Day little stuff and like Sydney to go to live Brisbane because all they have forces of flight proper way to be .properly weighted to go around the world and the right gas so nothing can happen.

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Writing - Recount

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