In the distance I see a light there is a bridge leading to a house that is 100 years old. Watching every step I take I slowly find my way across the bridge. Creeeeeeeek I can hear Doors opening and the rocking chair was rocking. No one was there. I slowly open the door aaaaaaaaaaaaaa. To be continued...
Wow Jerry, this really makes me want to keep reading. I hope you are going to continue your story! I am wondering if the rocking chair was making a spooky sound as it moved?
ReplyDeleteHey Jerry
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the start of your SPOOKY story with me.
I think you've done a great job of capturing audience attention, right at the beginning.
Well done Mate!