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Monday 29 May 2017

Haunted House

In the distance I see a light there is a bridge leading to a house that is 100 years old. Watching every step I take I slowly find my way across the bridge. Creeeeeeeek I can hear Doors opening and the rocking chair was rocking. No one was there. I slowly open the door aaaaaaaaaaaaaa. To be continued...





2 comments:

  1. Wow Jerry, this really makes me want to keep reading. I hope you are going to continue your story! I am wondering if the rocking chair was making a spooky sound as it moved?

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  2. Hey Jerry
    Thanks for sharing the start of your SPOOKY story with me.
    I think you've done a great job of capturing audience attention, right at the beginning.
    Well done Mate!

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