I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Thursday, 23 August 2018
Peephole Narrative
the was a bom and tipi was so so cool he spot the bom and the Mount Eden and in Mount Eden the bom was in the city and the People ana they Share the bom and it was in a home and the People want and the go go go and the man that did that and they want to the Military and the Military look for the man that did it and it was so so so not cool and people was so so so not cool Because he was not cool and he want home and a lot money and the popo come and he look in the peephole and it was man than he want out and it was a picturmpty and he was so so Dumb he want out and He got put to jail and the day Before that there was a I gave to go out of the jail and they want out than the jail was empty and the popo did care so the………………………………….
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