Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: it a sunny day to go to the beach and a hot day and from my Neck a Sweat of drops down on my leg and from The back of my Back And a look out of nowhere a see a bot Passing by go Toward the Pacific Ocean of leaving the land I see the bot in front of me seeing dolphins and look out in the sea I see sharks and other things Blue Sea Clearwater and i see a Coconut tree and that it…...
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: These shoes look like Old British newspapers and white stuff back and on leases All white things on it look like it came from The sewers look Out of the creek police came from the source found in the house in the Ground
Hi jerry your writting is running to new your can you ficks your writting thank you
ReplyDeleteGood work Jerry well done keep up the good work👍
ReplyDelete