Skydiving

 

Source

~ Skydiving ~

Imaginative Recount Writing

Walt: write an effective and engaging recount.

Walt: include a variety of sentence types in our writing.

Walt: elaborate on our ideas using interesting and relevant details.

Step 1: Watch the video of a skydive. Step 2:

Talk to your neighbour about what it would be like to go skydiving. Add your ideas to the padlet.
Step 3: Plan for your writing

Title
Imaginative Recount Writing
Introduction WWWWWH
Me and tipi.    I when it a plane i was Terrified. In a Alaska. Of the plane
3-4 Experiences
Experience: 1. 2. 3. 4.	Descriptive language/ elaborate: → → → →
Conclusion: How are you going to finish your recount?

Step 4: Start writing.

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Once upon a time I was terrified I was jumping off the flight I didn't know what I was doing then that's when I went jump off the plane I felt like ice cream stepping on my face then there was a felt like I was having a cold cold cold shower and school then there when I was terrified didn't know what to do then I'll put my parachutes then I felt like something was forcing me back I would like a dog pulling me and it was cool so as Icy cold shower

Checklist: I have watched the video of the sky dive. I have planned my writing. I have used punctuation (full stops, capital letters, etc.). I have added detail to my writing by adding descriptive vocab (adjectives, adverbs). I have used at least 3 of my senses in my writing (hear, see, taste, smell, touch). I have included my own emotions.