I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Friday, 31 August 2018
Wednesday, 29 August 2018
sheep View
If i was a sheep i will be like someone Was still my child and i will be Trying to attack the person who made my baby sheep cry and i The runaway I will chase after them i Think they will freeze and we will go away but i will run away with my baby Taylor because they might kill it and i will go get the dad sheep because than the Trying to be near my baby and i fut like i was i did look After my Child and he Was having a comfortable slip on under the tree the…. . END
Tuesday, 28 August 2018
Sheep Dictation"
The mother Sheep was walking along the path she Realise Touching distance with a lamb She let out a large Leap that echoes Across the paddock The sleepy lamb Came to What us slowly returning to has sleep The ship got closer and closer That thought I was gonna run I began to Penrith Was she going to attack me Holding my breath as I was free I side as the Sheep Dodged me Whew that was a close call… the END 1
The mother Sheep was walking along the path she Realise Touching distance with a lamb She let out a large Leap that echoes Across the paddock The sleepy lamb Came to What us slowly returning to has sleep The ship got closer and closer That thought I was gonna run I began to Penrith Was she going to attack me Holding my breath as I was free I side as the Sheep Dodged me Whew that was a close call… the END 1
Monday, 27 August 2018
Thursday, 23 August 2018
Peephole Narrative
the was a bom and tipi was so so cool he spot the bom and the Mount Eden and in Mount Eden the bom was in the city and the People ana they Share the bom and it was in a home and the People want and the go go go and the man that did that and they want to the Military and the Military look for the man that did it and it was so so so not cool and people was so so so not cool Because he was not cool and he want home and a lot money and the popo come and he look in the peephole and it was man than he want out and it was a picturmpty and he was so so Dumb he want out and He got put to jail and the day Before that there was a I gave to go out of the jail and they want out than the jail was empty and the popo did care so the………………………………….
Wednesday, 22 August 2018
Tuesday, 21 August 2018
Monday, 20 August 2018
Friday, 17 August 2018
Movie Narrative
Movie Narrative
WALT write our ideas in an order which makes sense.
WALT turn a narrative text into a movie storyboard.
Start writing here: One morning there was a boy named Stevenson, he was cool and he was handsome and he was so in love with animals. One day Stevenson went outside for adventurous walk with his dog Jaffa. While he was on his adventurous walk, he saw something very cool that was so beautiful he decided to walk over to the other side of the road and take a look at it. Guess what it was, it was a pet store. Stevenson was so happy that he took a look inside the shop.
When Stevenson entered, he saw a lot of cool things like goldfish,birds, cat and many more cool animals.
Stevenson was so happy that he. Could buy any animal in the shop, when he was looking around the shop, he saw a super cute cat and he fell in love with it so he bought it.
When he bought it he took it home with him that he made him a special bed and it was so warm.
Stevensons dog Jaffa was jealous because Stevenson was’t interested in the cat.
One night Jaffa was so angry Stevenson went to work one night and when the cat fell asleep, Jaffa went to go and gobble the cat up into his tummy.
YUM YUM said jaffa.
When stevenson came back from his job, he found out that he couldn’t find the cat, he looked and looked but couldn't find him.
Jaffa was sad that he did something wrong so he spewed the cat out of his tummy and jaffa got into deep trouble and jaffa got put down and Stevenson beautiful and Enormous and the cat was so so Jealous and the cat How to get rid of the enormous big dog.................
Thursday, 16 August 2018
Thursday, 9 August 2018
Friday, 3 August 2018
the My Hauora
Order is a Maori word the The four Maroon Supply ability and strength And the board dimensions are Taha tinana In Physical well-being your In a garden Anthony and self confident Taha whanau Social well-being and self-esteem Taha wairua Spiritual well-being I personally believe
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