Wednesday, 6 June 2018

Jerry Writing - Narrative Week 6 Term 2 2018

there was a donkey and a dog was Running so so fast they got in a big big pool and the donkey don't like the water but they like to eat water and it good for them then there was a green big big dog and it was the big dog and it was. Green it look like a fat bats and it was make a big mess and it was not cool Because the Enormous Because they was so so little they did do Anything but the did something They made a pan and they wanted to defeat the green dog because they was being mean to the little puppy and they've made a good plan and a trap to defeat her so we never can come back ever again Want another one came over and they made another chat so I can get stuck in the net and they will never come come come back again……………………….. The END

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